A More Prudent Parent

    By Stephanie


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    Part One

    Posted on Tuesday, 3 June 2008

    Chapter One

    ‘That gentleman looks like he doesn’t want to be here any more than I do,’ Mr. Bennet mused, observing the bored expression on the face of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy, who had just moments before entered the Meryton assembly rooms with Mr. Charles Bingley and his party.

    Mr. Bennet did not care for balls or social gatherings one bit—he only attended to keep watch over his daughters where his wife was not inclined to do so. And, of course, he often found diversion in the follies and faults of those around him.

    ‘Perhaps he would also prefer to spend his evening at home in the library. I may strike up a conversation with him and see if my guess is correct. Who knows, he may prove to be an interesting study.’

    His train of thought was broken by the shrill voice of Mrs. Bennet.

    “Mr. Bennet!” she cried, “Look! Look now, they are here! You must introduce us to Mr. Bingley immediately!”

    “Mrs. Bennet, I daresay Mr. Bingley will appear before us any minute now with that very intention, for he expressed a strong desire to be acquainted with our daughters when I called on him,” Mr. Bennet said dryly. “So you may hold your tongue. Mark my words, Bingley will need no prompting—“

    Mr. Bingley chose that moment to approach the Bennets, saying, “Mr. Bennet, I’m delighted to see you again.”

    “As am I,” Mr. Bennet replied. “Mr. Bingley, this is my wife, Mrs. Bennet, and our two eldest, Jane and Elizabeth.” He gestured to where his daughters stood on the other side of Mrs. Bennet. “Our daughter Mary sits over there, and our two youngest, Catherine and Lydia, are not yet out.”

    “We are very glad you are come to Hertfordshire, Mr. Bingley,” said Mrs. Bennet.

    “And I am very happy to make your acquaintance,” Bingley said, nodding to Jane and Elizabeth, who smiled prettily.

    “May I introduce you to my friend Mr. Darcy?”

    Darcy stepped forward slightly.

    “Certainly,” answered Mr. Bennet. ‘I had wondered how much longer he would continue to hover behind Bingley,’ he thought, amused.

    “Fitzwilliam Darcy, of Pemberley in Derbyshire,” Bingley said.

    “It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance,” Mr. Bennet said sincerely.

    “I thank you, sir,” Darcy replied stiffly.

    A moment of awkward silence followed.

    “Well then,” Bingley said brightly, turning to Jane, “Would you do the honor of dancing the first with me, Miss Bennet?”

    “Yes, I would, sir,” Jane answered.


    Chapter Two

    The music stopped and those who had been dancing began to mill about the room, but Bingley stood still, entranced by the lovely Miss Bennet.

    Jane began to feel disconcerted by Bingley’s staring. “Mr. Bingley?”

    “Oh! Thank you for our dance, Miss Bennet. It was wonderful.”

    She simply smiled demurely and excused herself with a graceful bow, walking over to where Mrs. Bennet stood talking to Charlotte and Lady Lucas.

    Bingley, in turn, returned to Darcy’s side and promptly admonished him for not dancing.

    “Come, Darcy,” he said. “I must have you dance. I hate to see you standing about by yourself in such a stupid manner.”

    “I certainly shall not. You know how I detest it, unless I am particularly acquainted with my partner. At an assembly such as this, it would be insupportable. Your sisters are engaged, and there is not another woman in the room whom it would not be a punishment to stand up with.”

    "I would not be so fastidious as you are," cried Bingley, "for a kingdom! Upon my honour, I never met with so many pleasant girls in my life as I have this evening; and there are several of them you see uncommonly pretty."

    "You are dancing with the only handsome girl in the room," said Mr. Darcy, looking at the eldest Miss Bennet.

    "Oh! she is the most beautiful creature I ever beheld! But there is one of her sisters sitting down just behind you, who is very pretty, and I dare say very agreeable. Do let me ask my partner to introduce you."

    "Which do you mean?" and turning round, he looked for a moment at Elizabeth, till catching her eye, he withdrew his own and coldly said, "She is tolerable; but not handsome enough to tempt me; and I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men. You had better return to your partner and enjoy her smiles, for you are wasting your time with me."

    Elizabeth Bennet was silently fuming as she overheard this exchange, but as she regained her composure, Elizabeth soon felt that the ridiculousness of the situation merited a good laugh with her friend.

    She got up and made her way toward Charlotte, unable to hide the smirk on her face as she passed Darcy.

    Unbeknownst to any of them, Mr. Bennet had silently observed both Bingley and Darcy’s conversation and Elizabeth’s reaction to it.


    Chapter Three

    Darcy paced about the assembly room, seemingly oblivious to the many curious eyes that followed him. As he stood near the entrance, Mr. Bennet approached him.

    “Mr. Darcy,” he began, with a gleam in his eye, “If I may say so, I believe we are of the same mind concerning our present occupation.”

    “I beg your pardon?” Darcy looked bewildered.

    “I daresay you would rather be spending a quiet evening at home, as would I,” Mr. Bennet replied, taking a step closer to Darcy. “Is that not so, sir?”

    Darcy’s eyes widened. “Indeed it is.”

    “May I also venture to guess that you are an avid reader?”

    “Reading is certainly one of my favorite pastimes.”

    “I should like to discuss literature with you sometime,” said Mr. Bennet. “Apart from my Lizzy, I do not often find intelligent conversation in my house.”

    As Darcy made no objection, he continued: “Would tomorrow at three be convenient for you?”

    “I have no engagements at present,” Darcy replied.

    “I thank you, sir,” said Mr. Bennet. “I look forward to it.”


    Chapter Four

    “Oh! What a delightful evening!” cried Mrs. Bennet, “There was nothing like it—Jane was so admired!”

    “But Mr. Darcy!” she continued, with a sudden change of expression, “Slighted poor Lizzy! I can assure you, however, that Lizzy does not lose much by not suiting his fancy; for he is a most disagreeable, horrid man, not at all worth pleasing. So high and so conceited that there was no enduring him! He walked here, and walked there, fancying himself so very great! Not handsome enough to dance with! I wish you would have given him one of your set downs. I quite detest the man."

    “Well, we cannot escape the acquaintance now,” Mr. Bennet remarked.

    “It is of no consequence,” said Elizabeth.

    “If you say so, dear. But I will say that I did not think him to be so disagreeable.”

    “Nor I,” added Jane. “I believe Mr. Darcy may improve on closer acquaintance.”

    The conversation soon ended due to the late hour, but Jane and Elizabeth resumed their discussion after they were ensconced in Jane’s bedroom.

    “We cannot expect much of Mr. Darcy,” Elizabeth began, “but what about Mr. Bingley?”

    "He is just what a young man ought to be," said Jane, "Sensible, good-humoured, lively--and I never saw such happy manners!"

    "He is also handsome," said Elizabeth laughingly, "which a young man ought to be, if he possibly can."

    "I was very much flattered by his asking me to dance a second time. I did not expect such a compliment."

    "Did not you? I did for you. But that is one great difference between us. Compliments always take you by surprise, and me never. What could be more natural than his asking you again? He could not help seeing that you were about five times as pretty as every other woman in the room. No thanks to his gallantry for that. Well, he certainly is very agreeable, and I give you leave to like him. You have liked many a stupider person."

    "Dear Lizzy!"

    "Oh! you are a great deal too apt, you know, to like people in general. You never see a fault in anybody. All the world are good and agreeable in your eyes. I never heard you speak ill of a human being in my life," Elizabeth said.

    "I would wish not to be hasty in censuring any one; but I always speak what I think."

    "I know you do; and it is that which makes the wonder. With your good sense to be so honestly blind to the follies and nonsense of others! Affectation of candour is common enough; -- one meets it everywhere. But to be candid without ostentation or design -- to take the good of everybody's character and make it still better, and say nothing of the bad -- belongs to you alone. And so you like this man's sisters too, do you? Their manners are not equal to his."

    "Certainly not--at first,” Jane replied. “But they are very pleasing women when you converse with them. Miss Bingley is to live with her brother, and keep his house, and I am much mistaken if we shall not find a very charming neighbour in her."

    Elizabeth sighed. “Very well, Jane.”


    Part Two

    Posted on Wednesday, 4 June 2008

    Chapter Five

    “Come in, Mr. Darcy,” called Mr. Bennet from his library.

    He entered. “Good day, sir. Is all your family in good health?”

    “Yes, yes,” Mr. Bennet said impatiently. “Welcome to Longbourn. Please have a seat.”

    Darcy sat down in the nearest chair and looked about the room.

    The two soon began a lively discussion of Shakespeare, and Darcy was pleasantly surprised to find Mr. Bennet in possession of a extensive knowledge of literature and a biting sense of humour.

    “Thank you for your invitation. I enjoyed your conversation,” said Darcy. “And your library is quite good. I daresay the quality is better than Bingley’s.”

    “Although I have not the means of supporting a great library, I had thought it might contain something tolerable enough to tempt a man such as yourself,” said Mr. Bennet with a wicked grin.

    The gentleman looked visibly flustered. “I—that is, I meant—do forgive me, Mr. Bennet. I was in a foul mood last night, but that was no excuse for such a remark.”

    “Indeed. I quite agree, Mr. Darcy. However, the one you should be asking forgiveness from is not me but Elizabeth.”

    “Of course, sir.”

    “My Lizzy does not take such things lightly. I fear she has become prejudiced against you, so be sure to approach her in a careful manner.”

    Darcy nodded his acquiescence.

    “Enough of that, then. I’m sure we will be seeing you soon,” Mr. Bennet said, showing Darcy to the door. “By the bye, I believe Elizabeth is currently in the gardens,” he added with a meaningful look.

    Stepping outside, it did not take Darcy long to spot Elizabeth.

    “Miss Elizabeth?” he asked quietly, trying not to startle her.

    Elizabeth turned in his direction. “Mr. Darcy,” she returned with a steely glare, “I did not expect to see you here.”

    “I have come to seek your forgiveness,” he began.

    Now Elizabeth looked startled. “Indeed?”

    “Yes. My comment yesterday—it was most rude of me, and furthermore, I—I did not mean—that is, I was only annoyed with Bingley because I was not inclined to dance.”

    Darcy paused and looked into her eyes. “I actually find you rather tempting.”

    Elizabeth was speechless for a moment, having just heard the last thing she would have ever expected from Mr. Darcy and finding herself lost in that man’s soulful gaze.

    Quickly she averted her eyes to regain her composure and managed a small “Oh.”

    “Your apology was most gracious, sir, and…I forgive you,” Elizabeth said finally, giving him a tentative smile.


    Chapter Six

    Standing next to Elizabeth in the Lucases’ drawing room, Mr. Bennet observed her sharp intake of breath as she saw Darcy enter the room.

    “Lizzy, are you alright? You look a bit flushed,” he said, teasing.

    Elizabeth, however, felt she probably was blushing (such were the nature of her thoughts on seeing Darcy), and answered seriously, “I am fine. I was just thinking—I believe you were correct in your assessment of Mr. Darcy.”

    “Oh? What do you make of his character now?”

    “I cannot make it out,” she replied. “Still, he has given me much to think on.”

    Charlotte approached, and the two friends began to talk animatedly. A few minutes later, Elizabeth noticed Darcy attending to their conversation from a distance.

    “What can Mr. Darcy mean by listening to our conversation?” she wondered aloud.

    "That is a question which Mr. Darcy only can answer."

    "But if he does it any more I shall certainly let him know that I see what he is about,” Elizabeth said.

    However, the next time she looked in his direction, Darcy had gone.

    “He is gone,” Elizabeth told Charlotte, “and it is very well, for I did not want to speak with him.”

    “Now, Lizzy,” Charlotte began.

    “I know what you are thinking, Charlotte. His apology may have caused me to think better of him than I did at the assembly, but I still say he has entirely too much pride. Mr. Darcy hardly speaks at all beyond his own party. He clearly thinks himself above the rest of us,” said Elizabeth hotly.

    “We will see. But Lizzy, try to keep an open mind,” Charlotte entreated her friend.

    Elizabeth strode purposefully across the room to speak to her father while Charlotte went to assist Lady Lucas with something.

    She was stopped by Sir William, who was standing next to Mr. Darcy.

    "My dear Miss Eliza, why are not you dancing? Mr. Darcy, you must allow me to present this young lady to you as a very desirable partner. You cannot refuse to dance, I am sure, when so much beauty is before you."

    “Indeed I cannot refuse,” said Darcy. “Miss Elizabeth, would you do me the honour of dancing the next with me?”

    “I thank you, but I am not inclined to dance,” she replied.

    Turning to Sir William, Elizabeth continued: "Indeed, sir, I have not the least intention of dancing. I entreat you not to suppose that I moved this way in order to beg for a partner."

    She gave Mr. Darcy an arch look and excused herself.


    Chapter Seven

    “Can I have the carriage?” Jane asked her father upon reading Caroline Bingley’s letter.

    "No, my dear, you had better go on horseback, because it seems likely to rain; and then you must stay all night," answered Mrs. Bennet.

    “There is no sense in that,” Mr. Bennet retorted. “Jane, I will not hear of you riding in this weather. You may have the carriage. I daresay we can spare it for a few hours.”

    “Thank you, father,” Jane said warmly.

    “Still, you must make what you can of it,” advised Mrs. Bennet. “Be sure to include Mr. Bingley when you return the invitation.”

    Jane assented and then prepared to leave.

    Later, as she looked out the carriage window, Jane wondered what would have happened if Mr. Bennet had not objected to Mrs. Bennet’s suggestion. She thought it very likely that she would have caught cold in this weather.

    Clouds loomed ominously in the darkening sky, and rain began to fall lightly just as Jane arrived at Netherfield.

    “Miss Bennet!” cried Miss Bingley as Jane stepped out of the carriage. “Do hurry, otherwise you will be soaked through.”

    “I assure you, I was in no danger,” Jane replied, coming in the entry hall. “It was only sprinkling.”

    However, the storm soon grew more violent, and the ladies could hear thunder approaching as they dined.

    “Goodness,” said Jane. “I do hope the skies will soon be clear again.”

    “You must not think of leaving while the rain continues,” Mrs. Hurst told her.

    The ladies retired to the sitting room after they had finished their meal. When Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst started interrogating her about her family’s connections, Jane began to feel uneasy.

    “And your mother’s brother resides in London?” Miss Bingley inquired.

    “Yes, in Gracechurch Street.”

    “What part of London is Gracechurch Street, Jane?”

    “Well, I—”

    Suddenly their conversation was halted by the sound of the gentlemen coming in the front door.

    Jane was immensely relieved to see Mr. Bingley come in, and a huge smile appeared on her face.

    “Miss Bennet!” cried Bingley, grinning ridiculously.

    Then he turned to his sister and said, “Caroline, you didn’t tell me Miss Bennet would be here.”

    “It must have slipped my mind,” she replied dryly.

    “Miss Bennet,” Darcy said abruptly. “You may be pleased to know that the rain has cleared.”

    “I am glad to hear it. Thank you for your attention,” said Jane. “Mr. Bingley, would you be so kind as to request that my carriage be readied?”

    “Of course,” he answered, wasting no time in dispatching a servant.

    “I would like to invite all of you to tea at Longbourn tomorrow afternoon,” she continued.

    “Splendid! We would be delighted!”


    Chapter Eight

    “You know very well why I refused to dance with him.”

    “Elizabeth,” said Mr. Bennet, eyeing her sternly.

    He loved his second daughter dearly, but there were times when her determination was more than a little frustrating. As Elizabeth sat across from him in the library, arms crossed with a pouty look on her face, Mr. Bennet wished for a moment that she would be less like himself.

    “Do you realize that Mr. Darcy sat in that very spot not a week ago?”

    Mr. Bennet’s offhand comment had caught Elizabeth off guard. “What do you mean? What business did he have here?”

    “It was not business. I invited Mr. Darcy here to discuss books. He accepted, and we had a pleasant time.”

    Elizabeth was silent.

    “Now, that does not sound like a man who thinks all of Hertfordshire beneath him, does it? I beg you would also consider that Mr. Darcy’s reticence in society stems from his natural shyness rather than pride.”

    “I will consider it,” Elizabeth said stiffly.

    “He and Bingley should be here soon. Elizabeth, please show me that you are considering what I said by your manner towards Mr. Darcy.”

    Not five minutes later, Elizabeth found herself greeting Mr. Darcy in the parlour.

    “Good day, Mr. Darcy.” She forced herself to smile, which was not very difficult as he looked rather handsome.

    Darcy, never having seen one of Elizabeth’s smiles directed at him, was mesmerized. He stared for a moment, then answered with a radiant smile of his own. “It is a pleasure to see you again, Miss Elizabeth.”

    The lady, in turn, was quite overcome by witnessing one of Mr. Darcy’s rare smiles, and barely heard a word that he said.

    Mr. Bennet chuckled. ‘They make an interesting couple,’ he thought.

    “Mrs. Bennet, I hope you will excuse my sisters. They are feeling a bit ill at present,” said Bingley.

    “Oh! Do send our regards to Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst.”

    Bingley moved closer to Jane and addressed her: “Miss Bennet, I hope you suffered no ill effects from the weather yesterday?”

    Jane’s eyes shined brightly. “I am quite well, sir.”

    After tea, Mrs. Bennet suggested that Jane and Elizabeth take their guests for a walk around Longbourn’s park.

    Jane and Bingley walked ahead, and Elizabeth was surprised when Darcy began the conversation.

    “Do you visit London often, Miss Elizabeth?”

    “I have been a few times,” she said slowly, “to stay with my aunt and uncle, the Gardiners.”

    “And do you prefer the country to town?”

    “Yes, I find it much more agreeable.”

    Darcy smiled. “I am of the same opinion. I would spend all my time in the country at Pemberley if I could.”

    They came to a turn in the path and paused.

    “Miss Elizabeth, I believe that you would appreciate the natural beauty of Pemberley more than most. Would you care to see it?”

    A slight frown crossed her features.

    “I hope I did not offend you,” Darcy said anxiously.

    “No, not at all, Mr. Darcy, I am flattered by your asking me to see Pemberley. I am only puzzled because your present behavior is quite different from what I first thought of you.”

    “I hope you will allow for mistaken first impressions,” Darcy said archly, raising an eyebrow.


    Chapter Nine

    “It was very nice of Mr. Bingley to personally invite us to his ball,” Jane said to Elizabeth.

    A week after Bingley and Darcy had come for tea, Bingley paid a short call on the ladies of Longbourn to invite them to the Netherfield Ball.

    “Yes, and you cannot deny it was a compliment to you,” Elizabeth replied, brushing out her long curls before bed.

    “Lizzy!” Jane reprimanded, blushing prettily nonetheless.

    “Especially,” she continued, “since your Mr. Bingley asked you for the first two dances straight away, ensuring that no other gentleman even had a chance!”

    “He is not my Mr. Bingley.”

    “If he is not, he very soon will be.”

    "Well, what about your Mr. Darcy?"

    "I have nothing to say about that gentleman."

    "It is clear that he admires you, Lizzy. No one could miss his marked attentions of late."

    “Good night, Jane.”

    Sleep was elusive for Elizabeth that night and she rose earlier than her usual hour to find solace in a walk before breakfast.

    She slipped outside quietly and made her way toward Oakham Mount, reveling in the simple glories of nature and the coolness of the morning air.

    After a few minutes Elizabeth heard a rider approaching.

    She turned, and on recognizing the man cried, “Mr. Darcy!”

    Darcy dismounted and walked his horse over to where she stood. “I hope I did not disturb you. Is this one of your favorite walks?”

    “Yes, it is,” Elizabeth answered. “You have a habit of surprising me, sir.”

    Darcy only flashed her another smile, further increasing her opinion of him.

    “Do you also have a habit of riding early?” she inquired.

    “I often ride before the rest of the house is awake. I find it relaxing.”

    “I see.”

    “Miss Elizabeth…”

    “Yes?” she said breathlessly.

    “May I request the honour of dancing the first set with you at Bingley’s ball?”

    “I should like that very much.”


    Part Three

    Posted on Thursday, 12 June 2008

    Chapter Ten

    “Papa? Has something happened?” asked Jane as she and Elizabeth entered Mr. Bennet’s study.

    “I would like your assistance,” Mr. Bennet said seriously.

    “Of course,” the sisters replied in unison.

    “It has recently come to my attention that Mary seems a bit neglected.”

    Jane and Elizabeth exchanged a glance. “I confess it escaped my notice,” Elizabeth admitted.

    “Yes, well, I would like to see the two of you involving Mary in your activities more. And perhaps you could help her with a new hairstyle or something?”

    “I will do everything I can,” Jane promised.

    “As will I. Perhaps Mary would enjoy walking with me?” Elizabeth said.

    So it was that Mary Bennet began to come into her own. Mr. Bennet spent a little time asking her about books she had read, Jane helped Mary with her appearance, and Elizabeth became her confidante during their daily walks. The effects were immediate. Even a few days after their conversation in the study, Mr. Bennet started to notice improvements. Mary smiled more, had a healthy glow in her cheeks, and did not quote Fordyce as often.

    One afternoon, as Elizabeth and Mary were walking, the elder remarked, “You have become a very pleasant companion, Mary. You used to be so severe. Why was that?”

    “It is hard to say,” Mary said slowly. “I think I felt ignored by you and my other sisters because we did not enjoy the same things, so I had to seek attention in my own way.”

    She smiled ruefully. “It did not work very well, did it?”

    “No. But I am to blame as well. I should have shown more interest in you,” Elizabeth replied.

    “Mr. Darcy seems to have quite the interest in you, Lizzy,” Mary said mischievously, changing the subject. “What is your opinion of him now?”

    “I can no longer find fault with Mr. Darcy,” she answered. “Beyond that, I cannot say.” Elizabeth could not reveal that she had begun to find Mr. Darcy attractive. She thought of their last few conversations, shivering as she recalled the intense look in his dark eyes. Elizabeth looked forward to the Netherfield Ball with great anticipation.


    Chapter Eleven

    “…If you should have no objection to receive me into your house, I propose myself the satisfaction of waiting on you and your family, Monday, November 18th, by four o'clock, and shall probably trespass on your hospitality till the Saturday se'nnight following, which I can do without any inconvenience, as Lady Catherine is far from objecting to my occasional absence on a Sunday, provided that some other clergyman is engaged to do the duty of the day. -- I remain, dear sir, with respectful compliments to your lady and daughters, your well-wisher and friend, William Collins."

    "At four o'clock, therefore, we may expect this peace-making gentleman," said Mr. Bennet, as he folded up the letter.

    “Odious man,” muttered Mrs. Bennet.

    "He must be an oddity, I think," said Elizabeth, "I cannot make him out. Can he be a sensible man, sir?"

    "No, my dear; I think not. I have great hopes of finding him quite the reverse,” Mr. Bennet replied.

    Kitty and Lydia showed no interest whatsoever, while Mary admired the expression of Mr. Collins’ letter. Sometime later, the Bennets assembled near the front door to greet their relation and found him to be all they expected. Mr. Collins was not a sensible man, and the deficiency of nature had been but little assisted by education or society. His pretentious manner did little to recommend him. Furthermore, Mr. Collins’ overtures admiring everything that belonged to Longbourn, while meant to flatter, were interpreted as a sign of avarice.

    However, Mrs. Bennet was not so insensible as to discourage Mr. Collins’ intention to marry one of her daughters. Indeed, when the clergyman approached her in the course of the next morning, Mrs. Bennet had already decided which Miss Bennet would be intended for him.

    “Lady Catherine de Bourgh, you know,” Mr. Collins began, “is the model of condescension. The very parsonage where I reside suffers no lack of attention on her part. Why, there is nothing to be done which that great lady does not instruct me on….”

    Mrs. Bennet quickly grew disinterested in Mr. Collins’ speech, which droned on for several minutes until she heard mention of marriage.

    “…greatest hope, that a mistress for it might be found here at Longbourn. Lady Catherine has informed me specifically that she wishes me to take a wife before my return to Kent. The very Saturday before I left, she said to me, 'Mr. Collins, you must marry. A clergyman like you must marry. Choose properly, choose a gentlewoman for my sake; and for your own, let her be an active, useful sort of person, not brought up high, but able to make a small income go a good way. This is my advice. Find such a woman as soon as you can, bring her to Hunsford, and I will visit her.'”

    By this point Mrs. Bennet was all attentiveness.

    “So you see, my dear Mrs. Bennet, I have come with the best of intentions toward you and your daughters.” He hesitated a moment, and then pressed on: “Perhaps the eldest Miss Bennet?”

    “Oh! Mr. Collins, I feel it incumbent upon me to inform you that my eldest will very soon be engaged,” said Mrs. Bennet. “And the next eldest, Elizabeth,” she added almost as an afterthought. Mrs. Bennet was not entirely sure of the attachment between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, but she would take no chances offending the great Mr. Darcy.

    “I see,” Mr. Collins replied slowly, shaking his head in confusion.

    “Kitty and Lydia are not yet out, you know, but I think Mary would make a fine parson’s wife,” she said hopefully.


    Chapter Twelve

    Elizabeth was growing restless in the days before the ball, so she organized a walk to Meryton.

    “My dear cousin Mary, will you accompany me on our walk?” Mr. Collins simpered.

    “Of course she will!” cried Mrs. Bennet, effectively eliminating Mary’s ability to respond.

    So Mr. Collins, Mary, Jane, and Elizabeth set off. For the first few minutes, they engaged their cousin in polite conversation, but that soon turned into a monologue from Mr. Collins. Fortunately, he was so consumed by his own raptures on the splendor of Rosings that the sisters were able to amuse themselves by whispering and laughing quietly.

    Upon entering the village, one of the officers made his way toward them.

    “Good day, Miss Bennet, Miss Elizabeth, Miss Mary,” said Mr. Denny, greeting each of the girls.

    They responded in a similar manner and then Jane asked, “May we introduce our cousin Mr. Collins?”

    “Certainly, it is my pleasure,” replied Denny.

    “Mr. Collins, this is Lieutenant Denny.”

    “Indeed it is my pleasure, sir. My lovely cousins are so gracious and kind as to bring me into Meryton this afternoon—“
    Elizabeth interrupted hastily, before Mr. Collins really went on, “Sir, won’t you introduce your friend?”

    “Of course, I beg your pardon for having almost forgotten.” Denny motioned for Wickham to come forward. “My friend, Mr. George Wickham, has just come from London with me. He is to join the regiment here at Meryton.”

    “I’m delighted to make the acquaintance of such charming young ladies,” Wickham said smilingly.

    “It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance as well,” replied Elizabeth. They conversed for a few minutes and she could not deny that his countenance and manners were pleasing.

    Mary, ever observant, was the first to notice Darcy and Bingley riding down the street in their direction. “Look, there’s Mr. Bingley,” she said, nudging Jane.

    The gentlemen approached and began the usual civilities, but much of this was lost on Elizabeth, who was distracted by noticing Darcy’s face turn red when he saw Wickham. She was all astonishment at the cold manner of their greeting, and filled with curiosity as to their situation. However, having known Mr. Darcy for some time, Elizabeth could not help but feel wary of Mr. Wickham.

    Over the course of the next couple days, Elizabeth kept these musings to herself, as no one else appeared to have noticed the palpable tension between Darcy and Wickham. When Mr. Wickham importuned her with the story of how Darcy wronged him, Elizabeth became distraught. She could not reconcile the man who disregarded his father’s will for his godson with the man who gazed at her and invited her to see his home. The confusion Elizabeth felt drove her to seek solace in Jane’s company and advice, but it was futile, for Jane refused to believe ill of either Darcy or Wickham.


    Chapter Thirteen

    “Bingley, are you not ready?” Darcy asked, finding his friend in his rooms. “Your guests will be here shortly.”

    “Yes, yes, in a moment,” Bingley replied.

    Darcy had been dressed for the ball over an hour ago, his appearance meticulously arranged with the help of his valet. He looked quite dashing. But under the mask of his reserve, Darcy’s mind was a wreck with thoughts of Wickham.

    Even as the guests began to arrive, Darcy could think of little else. It was not until the Bennets made an appearance that he found a sufficient distraction in the form of the lovely Miss Elizabeth.

    Darcy gallantly bowed before her and kissed her hand. “Miss Elizabeth, you look beautiful this evening.”

    “Thank you, sir,” she replied, blushing.

    Darcy offered Elizabeth his arm and escorted her into the room. The two engaged in polite conversation, talking of nothing significant, until the first dance began.

    Much as Elizabeth relished the feel of dancing with Darcy, she was plagued with a sense of discomfort not knowing what had really happened with Wickham. She did not wish to spoil the moment, but Elizabeth had to bring up the subject of that man.

    “When you met us in Meryton the other day,” she began, “we had just formed a new acquaintance.”

    The effect was immediate. A deeper shade of hauteur overspread his features, but he said not a word, and Elizabeth, though blaming herself for her own weakness, could not go on. She would not further provoke Darcy’s anger or displeasure.

    Silently they continued dancing. Darcy’s face had lost all expression and he did not even look at Elizabeth to see her fine eyes pleading him to speak.

    After a length of time, the music stopped and Elizabeth found herself being guided out of the ballroom by Darcy’s hand on the small of her back.

    Astonished, but not wishing to make a scene, she waited until they reached the hallway and then whirled around to berate Darcy for his presumption.

    He, however, spoke first. “I beg your pardon, madam. Again I have treated you most rudely.”

    Elizabeth glared at him.

    “But I had good reason. When you mentioned—that man—my anger rose to the point where I judged it best not to say anything at all.”

    “And may I not understand why Mr. Wickham makes you so angry?”

    Darcy looked at her softly for a moment and then answered, “It is a difficult matter, but I believe that is not too much to ask. Indeed, I would have told you sooner had you asked.”

    He motioned to a room down the hall, suggesting that they continue the conversation in the library.

    When they were settled in two of the chairs, Darcy began, “Mr. Wickham is the son of a very respectable man…”

    A half hour later, he concluded saying, "This, madam, is a faithful narrative of every event in which we have been concerned together, and if you do not absolutely reject it as false, you will, I hope, acquit me henceforth of cruelty towards Mr. Wickham.”

    Elizabeth was at a loss for words. She stared at her hands folded tightly in her lap and felt ashamed that she could have ever doubted Darcy.

    Finally she said, “Of course I believe you, Mr. Darcy.”

    Darcy’s features relaxed visibly.

    “I never believed Wickham’s lies either,” she said hurriedly, wanting to reassure him. “I simply did not understand your history with him because there seemed to be some truth to what he said.”

    “Naturally,” said Darcy.

    The corners of his mouth turned up into a smile as he rose from his seat. “Before we return to the ballroom, I would like to ask you a question. Two questions, actually.”

    “Yes?”

    “What are your sister’s feelings for Mr. Bingley?”

    “She loves him,” Elizabeth declared firmly.

    “I am glad to hear it. Now, will you grant me permission to court you?”

    “I will,” she replied.


    Chapter Fourteen

    Breakfast the next day found the Bennets in recollection of the last night’s festivities.

    Jane and Elizabeth kept to themselves, smiling and laughing quietly.

    Mrs. Bennet was in raptures over Mr. Bingley, whom she believed was soon to propose, although Jane would not comment on that topic.

    Mr. Bennet silently observed the warm glow on Elizabeth’s cheeks and realized that he was about to lose his second daughter sooner than he thought.

    And Mr. Collins stared licentiously at Mary throughout the whole meal, hardly noticing the porridge he was spilling on his coat.

    At the end of the meal, the clergyman addressed Mrs. Bennet: "May I hope, madam, for your interest with your fair daughter Mary, when I solicit for the honour of a private audience with her in the course of this morning?"

    Before Mary had time for anything but a blush of surprise, Mrs. Bennet instantly answered, "Oh dear! Yes--certainly. I am sure Mary will be very happy--I am sure she can have no objection.”


    Posted on Monday, 23 June 2008

    Chapter Fifteen

    Upon hearing Mr. Collins’ request, the colour had drained from Mary’s face. Now she gave her sisters a pleading look, silently urging them to come to her aid.

    While Mrs. Bennet ushered everyone else out of the room, Jane sent Mary a sympathetic glance and Elizabeth simply rolled her eyes at Mr. Collins.

    He took the seat closest to her—much too near for Mary’s comfort—and immediately began his speech.

    “My dear Mary,” Mr. Collins leered.

    She shuddered to hear her name spoken so.

    “You can hardly doubt the purport of my discourse, however your natural delicacy may lead you to dissemble; my attentions have been too marked to be mistaken. Almost as soon as I entered the house, I singled you out as the companion of my future life. But before I am run away with by my feelings on this subject, perhaps it will be advisable for me to state my reasons for marrying--and, moreover, for coming into Hertfordshire with the design of selecting a wife, as I certainly did.”

    Mary felt it wise to speak now.

    “Mr. Collins! You are too hasty! I pray you will allow me to voice my opinion before you are run away with your feelings!”

    Drawing herself up to her full height and giving Mr. Collins an angry glare, she continued: “I must say that I have no intention whatsoever of accepting this farce of a proposal. How dare you speak so presumptuously! You, sir, are a disgrace to your office. Your attentions to me—I have never—such improper—”

    “You cannot be serious!” he cried. “You must consider that my situation in life, my connections with the family of de Bourgh, and my relationship to your own, are circumstances highly in my favour, and you should take it into farther consideration that, in spite of your manifold attractions, it is by no means certain that another offer of marriage may ever be made you.”

    “Why—you—” Mary sputtered, outraged.

    “You cannot refuse while your parents favor the match,” Collins said smugly.

    Mary’s astonishment was complete. Her cousin was more pig-headed than she had previously believed. While Mr. Collins continued to stand there, looking as if he expected her to surrender, Mary turned her back on him and stormed out of the room.

    She did not have to look far to find Mr. Bennet, as all of her family was assembled outside of the breakfast room, clearly eavesdropping.

    “Foolish girl!” cried Mrs. Bennet. “Are you out of your senses, child, speaking to Mr. Collins in that manner?”

    Mrs. Bennet continued her diatribe, but its object ignored her.

    Mary sighed.

    “Papa?” She asked tentatively.

    He smiled fondly at her. “Do not fear. I fully support your decision. I only wish I could have seen the expression on Mr. Collins’ face when you informed him that he was a disgrace to his office!”


    Chapter Sixteen

    27 November 18--
    Netherfield

    Mr. Bennet,

    I am writing to you, first, because I feared Bingley's letter, in his usual style, would be illegible.

    The first line received a chuckle from Mr. Bennet. Indeed, upon seeing the chicken scratch he now realized was Bingley's letter, he had promptly disposed of it in his hearth.

    As Bingley wrote, he departed for London early this morning. His intent was to give his regards to your eldest daughter. Bingley promises to return as soon as
    his business is concluded, which he believes will be late tomorrow.
    My second purpose in writing is to express my gratitude for your consent. I intend to give Miss Elizabeth a proper courtship, and I would like to begin by calling at Longbourn this afternoon. I also request that you give her my regards in the enclosed note. Yours, etc.

    Fitzwilliam Darcy

    "Darcy certainly does not waste any time," Mr. Bennet muttered. He was actually rather pleased with the letter, feeling that the good news for Jane and Elizabeth was
    quite welcome after the episode with Collins earlier that morning.

    Mr. Bennet wrote a quick reply, informing Darcy that he was of course welcome to come, but may wish to postpone his visit because Collins was still disturbing the peace of his household.

    He then found Elizabeth in her room. “It is likely against my better judgment for you to be receiving this correspondence, but here is your note from Mr. Darcy. We may expect him this afternoon,” he told her.

    Elizabeth eagerly took the folded paper and began perusing its contents as Mr. Bennet quietly left the room.

    27 November 18--
    Netherfield

    Miss Elizabeth,

    I regret that we had not time for more pleasant conversation after speaking on the subject of my childhood friend. Nevertheless, I had a wonderful time with you at the ball.
    I hope you have not forgotten my request that you visit me at Pemberley. It would give me great pleasure to show you my home. My plans to journey there are not yet fixed, but I hope it will be soon, before Christmas.

    Your devoted servant,
    Fitzwilliam Darcy

    She sighed contentedly, stretching out on her bed. Elizabeth could not but feel extremely pleased with her ardent suitor. She did, however, wonder how it had come about so quickly.


    Chapter Seventeen

    As Darcy was shown into Longbourn’s entry hall by the housekeeper, he heard loud voices coming from the parlor.

    “I cannot stand this incessant noise!”

    “But Mr. Collins! I insist--you must stay longer. These matters take time. If Mary does not come around, perhaps Kitty will do!” cried Mrs. Bennet.

    Mr. Bennet then came forward. “Good day, Mr. Darcy.”

    “Good day, sir.”

    Motioning for Darcy to follow him to the parlor, Mr. Bennet added, “They have been at it for hours; I am quite at my wit’s end.”

    The shouting continued.

    Darcy did not respond for a full minute, leaving Mr. Bennet rather confused. The younger gentleman contemplated the situation, wondering if it might be in his power to assist the Bennets. The elder gentleman soon forgot his confusion, being diverted by the reflection that although Darcy was rather astute, he often appeared oblivious to his surroundings.

    Finally an idea came to his mind and Darcy began to address Mr. Bennet but was interrupted by Collins yelling “Enough, madam!” and storming past them out the door.

    “Well,” Mr. Bennet said pleasantly, “That settles it, then. I don’t suppose he will return shortly, eh, Darcy?”

    “I suppose not.”


    The extent of Mr. Collins’ frustration was such that he hurried outside at a frenzied pace and continued walking (not too fast, mind you) without really paying attention to where he was going. No one attempted to stop him or follow him, so he kept going for quite some time, muttering to himself all the way. Before long he had approached the gardens at Netherfield.

    Unmindful as he was, Mr. Collins failed to notice the elegantly dressed lady walking a short distance in front of him. By the time he was close enough to notice the ornate detail on her orange gown, it was too late. Mr. Collins had knocked her down and fallen on top of her.

    The lady emitted an earsplitting shriek and her brother came running out of the house, having just returned from London earlier than expected.

    One look at the situation and Bingley’s countenance became unusually grave.

    “Sir, remove yourself from my sister’s person at once!”

    Miss Bingley looked on in horror as he eyed Mr. Collins with disgust and said, “You will do the honorable thing and marry her.”


    Chapter Eighteen

    After Mrs. Bennet fainted and was promptly carried up to her rooms, the rest of the Bennets sat down to tea with Darcy. Conversation was pleasant and lighthearted as they celebrated the departure of Mr. Collins. Darcy appeared very much the besotted suitor, hardly taking his eyes off Elizabeth. She, in turn, received his attentions with pleasure, though she was not to the point of publicly expressing her own blossoming affection for him.

    Elizabeth looked up from her tea to see Darcy gazing intently at her across the table. Her fine eyes flashed brightly and a secret smile broke out on her face.

    Her rather silly-looking smile did not escape her sisters, however.

    “Lizzy? Why are you smiling so?” Kitty asked.

    Rather than answer her question, Elizabeth and Darcy both began laughing uncontrollably.


    As he was sneaking back to his barrack, Wickham’s thoughts turned again to Elizabeth Bennet. His friend Denny told him about Darcy’s attentions to her at the Netherfield Ball. He had been lying low for some time, but he had no intention of letting Darcy win that easily.


    Charles Bingley was distressed. A few hours earlier he had been elated to leave London and return to Netherfield, to Jane, but fate had other plans for him. Now it was his business to arrange his sister’s marriage to that simpering, toad-like clergyman. Bingley, as we know, is a very kind-hearted person, but even he never had very cordial feelings toward Mr. Collins. It was quite a troublesome matter.

    He sighed and began writing to his solicitor directly. An hour and three revisions later, the letter was fairly legible. Bingley then rode to Longbourn to notify Darcy and the Bennets of the engagement.

    Upon his arrival, Jane happened to be the first person to greet him at the door. Bingley silently thanked the Lord that one good thing had happened to him.

    “Miss Bennet.” Bingley forced a smile. “I cannot tell you how glad I am to see you again. Unfortunately, I have a pressing matter to attend to. I only stopped for a few minutes to tell you all the recent news.”

    Jane’s face fell. “Oh dear, I’m very sorry, Mr. Bingley. Is there nothing that can be done?”

    “I’m afraid not.”

    She nodded and led him into the parlor where everyone was assembled.

    “Bingley!” Darcy said jovially. “I was not aware you had returned already.”

    “Did you have a pleasant trip?” inquired Mr. Bennet.

    “The journey was fine,” he replied. “But—well, that is—what I came to tell you is that when I returned I came upon your cousin, Mr. Collins, and my sister, Caroline, in a compromising position.”

    Bingley’s face had tightened considerably while he was speaking. He paused a moment to compose himself while the rest of the room stared at him with blank expressions.

    “There was only one option,” he continued. “My sister is now engaged to Mr. Collins.”

    An awkward silence ensued. No one quite knew what the appropriate response to such an announcement was.

    “Come now, don’t all speak at once,” Bingley said uneasily.

    Then he noticed that Darcy’s whole body was shaking slightly.

    “Darcy?” he said incredulously. “Are you laughing?”


    Chapter Nineteen

    The hour was late. Jane looked pensively out her bedroom window. A gentle breeze blew her curls away from her face while her gaze unknowingly drifted towards Netherfield. She felt that the last few weeks had been like a whirlwind without much time for reflection.

    Jane laughed quietly. She did not need time for reflection to know how she felt about Mr. Bingley. If nothing else, her wildly beating heart had made it clear when she opened the door to see him.

    Jane was hopelessly in love with Charles Bingley.


    The next day the Bennets attended a small party at Mrs. Philipps’ house in Meryton to which the officers were invited.

    “Miss Elizabeth,” Wickham greeted her. “It has been far too long since I have had the pleasure of your company.”

    “Mr. Wickham,” she returned. Elizabeth was most annoyed at having to speak with him.

    “I beg your pardon, but, as your friend, there is something I must tell you.”

    She arched her eyebrow questioningly.

    “I do hope that Mr. Darcy has not given you false hopes with his attentions of late, for he is engaged.”

    “Engaged?” Elizabeth asked, turning pale.

    “Yes, he has been engaged for quite some time to his cousin, Miss de Bourgh.

    At Elizabeth’s shocked silence Wickham continued, “It is no surprise to me that Darcy did not inform you himself. He likely thought he could do whatever he liked while he was here in Hertfordshire.”

    She looked down sadly.

    Wickham scanned the room quickly and was pleased to notice that Darcy had just entered the room with the Netherfield party.

    He leaned closer and took Elizabeth’s hands in his. “I hope you are not too disappointed. I always knew, though, that Darcy would never go against his family’s wishes for his marriage.”

    Darcy watched intently from across the room, his fists curled up in anger. He let out a deep breath and walked out, unnoticed by all save Wickham.


    Posted on: 2008-07-05

    Chapter Twenty

    It was a new day, Charles Bingley decided. Nothing would interfere with his relationship with Jane today.

    He found Darcy in the breakfast room. “Good morning, Darcy. Lovely day, is it not? You will accompany me to Longbourn today, will you not?”

    Darcy’s unreadable expression never faltered. “I had rather not,” he said shortly, in a tone that indicated he would brook no opposition.

    Bingley frowned. “And why not? I was sure you would be eager to see Miss Elizabeth.”

    Darcy stubbornly remained silent.

    “Have it your way, then,” Bingley muttered, walking out of the room.


    As Hill led Bingley into the parlor, his earlier confidence was lost. A sudden case of nervousness plagued him and he wondered if he was mad to propose so soon.

    Those gathered in the parlor—Mrs. Bennet and all five daughters—stood to greet Bingley as he entered.

    “Mr. Bingley,” said Jane, her calm voice betraying the nervousness she felt. “We did not expect you so soon with all the arrangements to be made.”

    He had finished with the arrangements the day before, but Bingley, staring at Jane’s angelic features, could not recall anything of the sort, and only said, “I—I could not stay away.”

    “In any case, we are very glad you are come, Mr. Bingley,” said Mrs. Bennet, winking at Jane.

    Everyone was silent for a minute. Mary observed that Elizabeth was uncharacteristically quiet today and her eyes were missing their usual sparkle. She decided she would have to speak if Elizabeth would not—the awkwardness was too much to bear.

    “How long do you think you will stay at Netherfield, Mr. Bingley?” Mary asked.

    “My plans are not yet fixed,” he replied.

    A shorter, yet still awkward pause followed.

    Bingley then cleared his throat. “Er, may I request a private audience with Miss Bennet?”

    Mrs. Bennet excitedly ushered her younger daughters out. Elizabeth was last to leave, squeezing Jane’s hand reassuringly as she went.

    Jane thought that surely her heart was beating so loudly Mr. Bingley could hear it.

    “Miss Bennet…Jane…you are truly an angel to me. I believe I loved you from the first moment I saw your lovely smile.”

    She was speechless.

    Bingley dropped to one knee and took Jane’s hands in his. “Jane, will you marry me?”

    “Yes, yes, a thousand times yes,” she cried

    He gently caressed her face and whispered, “My angel.”


    Chapter Twenty-One

    Mr. Bennet’s consent was soon procured and Mrs. Bennet’s raptures filled the house.

    Elizabeth, while happy for her sister, was still feeling a bit distressed and decided to forego the celebration for a quiet walk outdoors.

    She wished with all her heart that Wickham had been lying about Darcy, but Elizabeth could not doubt him so easily. She felt there was truth in all his looks. And, she told herself, even though Wickham had wronged Darcy, surely he would have no reason to spread rumours about a false engagement. She enjoyed Darcy’s company very much, but felt it was too much to hope that a man of his station would propose marriage.

    Elizabeth continued walking. A sudden gust of wind blew and she paused to look around. She saw a rider approaching in the distance. Her thoughts flew automatically to Darcy, anxiously wondering if he was near. She sighed.

    Then her musings took a different turn. Elizabeth remembered that Darcy had asked to court her. Maybe she was wrong. Maybe he did have serious intentions toward her. Darcy had asked for her, had pursued her, despite everything else. But even so, she concluded, if he was engaged, then none of that mattered. She frowned, utterly confused.


    Not long after Mr. Charles Bingley became engaged, his sister, Miss Caroline Bingley, was married. The ceremony itself was a rather hurried affair. A party consisting of Mr. Bingley, Miss Bingley, Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, Mr. Collins, and Mr. Bennet traveled to London one morning and when they returned the next day Caroline Bingley bore the name Collins.


    “Lizzy, I have not seen anything of Mr. Darcy in quite a while.”

    “Nor have I.”

    “It has been almost a week, I believe…since that evening at the Philips?” Mr. Bennet asked.

    “Truly, I cannot account for it. I did not even see Mr. Darcy that night,” she replied. “Did you speak with him?”

    “No, I did not. From what I saw, he did not stay long.” Mr. Bennet paused to think for a moment. “But I do recall—it was most strange—he looked quite angry before he left. I cannot imagine why.”

    Suddenly understanding dawned. Elizabeth’s eyes widened. “I think I can imagine why. He must have seen me with Mr. Wickham.”

    “What happened, Lizzy?”

    “He told me that Mr. Darcy was engaged. Papa, it was the last thing I expected to hear. I was shocked. I did not know what to think. Even now, I…I cannot deny the possibility that he may be engaged.”

    “Elizabeth, do you not see? This is foolishness.”

    She stared wonderingly. “I beg your pardon?”

    “Let me explain. Before Wickham gave you this…information, you never thought that Darcy could be engaged, did you?” he asked pointedly.

    “No.”

    “Darcy asked to court you, did he not?”

    “Yes.”

    “And we know Darcy to be an honorable man, do we not?”

    “Yes.”

    “Then, my dear, there was absolutely no reason to believe that Darcy could be secretly engaged, was there not?”

    Elizabeth sighed. “There was no reason,” she affirmed.

    “Will you please enlighten me as to why you believed it to be so?”

    “Papa, to be honest, I do not fully understand it myself. But I will try to explain.” She gazed out the window, seemingly lost in thought. “You know I am determined that only the deepest love will induce me to marry. But I often feel—I mean, I felt that would never happen. I was resigned to being a governess and devoted aunt. With Mr. Darcy, it seemed too good to be true. That is why I was willing to believe Wickham’s lies.”

    “Dear Lizzy, you are a foolish girl,” Mr. Bennet chuckled. “But in all seriousness, it is not too good to be true. Remember that you are more than worthy of love.”


    Chapter Twenty-Two

    Mary Bennet’s brow creased in confusion. That was the third time Mr. Rochester had turned around in his pew to look at her when he thought no one was watching. Not that she had been watching his every move or anything. It was rather difficult not to notice.

    Mr. James Rochester, formerly of London, currently of Meryton, had been recently employed as a clerk in Mr. Philips’ office. He was not a wealthy man by any means, but he was admired by many for his strong work ethic and pleasing manners. Mr. Rochester had a fine figure, a pair of piercing blue eyes, and an understated charm that was most endearing. He had become acquainted with most of Hertfordshire, including the Bennets, through his employer.

    As the clergyman gave the final blessing at the end of the service, Mr. Rochester nervously ran a hand through his sandy brown hair.

    He quickly made his way to Mary. “Miss Bennet?”

    She laughed. “Miss Bennet is my eldest sister, you know,” Mary said archly.

    “Oh. Yes. Miss Mary?”

    “That would be me.”

    “May I escort you home?”

    “I would like that.” She looked questioningly to Mr. Bennet (who had been carefully observing their conversation) and he nodded his consent.

    As Mary expected, Mr. Rochester offered her his arm as they began walking. What she did not expect was the tingling sensation his touch gave.

    “That shade of green is particularly becoming on you,” he said, admiring her gown.

    “Thank you,” she replied, smiling weakly.


    “Good day, Mr. Bennet, Mrs. Bennet,” Darcy greeted them after church. “Miss Elizabeth.” He glanced around with that unreadable expression, not meeting her eyes.

    Mr. Bennet narrowed his eyes at Darcy. ‘Idiot,’ he thought.

    Elizabeth curtsied politely but said nothing.

    “If you will excuse me, I must catch up with my other daughters,” Mr. Bennet said, guiding Mrs. Bennet away with him.

    The couple looked about awkwardly for a moment.

    “Have you spoken with Mr. Wickham lately?” Darcy asked abruptly.

    “You know I have,” she replied fiercely. “But I would beg you not to assume anything beyond that.”

    “When I saw you with him—can you not see how that tortured me?” he cried. “What would you have me think of that?”

    “I would not tell you what to think. I can only tell you what happened from my point of view.”

    Darcy nodded.

    “He said that you were engaged. And I…“—her voice faltered—“I did not fully believe it, but I…I doubted…”

    His face turned cold as stone. “How could you? How could you think that?”

    “I know it was foolish,” she said quietly. “But it seemed possible to me, because it was too much to hope that…I mean, before—this—I had despaired of marrying for love…”

    Darcy’s expression softened.

    A tear rolled down her cheek. “I hope you can comprehend that. I don’t know how else to explain it!”

    “I understand. Please, be assured, I am not engaged. I have never been engaged,” Darcy spoke quickly, trying to reassure her.

    She nodded, her eyes bright and glistening with unshed tears.

    “Elizabeth,” he whispered gently, caressing her face. “I love you.”


    Chapter Twenty-Three

    “Oh! It is as I always knew it would be, Mr. Bennet! I believe we will soon have three daughters married!”

    “Three daughters? What can you mean?”

    “Do you not see? Jane and Mr. Bingley, Lizzy and Mr. Darcy, and Mary and Mr. Rochester!”

    “Mr. Rochester? She barely knows the man. I barely know the man!”

    “I saw the way he looked at her. Believe me, Mr. Bennet, I am quite knowledgeable about these matters!”


    Jane Bennet could not stop smiling. She grabbed Elizabeth’s hand and spun her around the garden, laughing.

    “It is plain to see that Jane is in love,” Elizabeth teased. “But what about you, Mary?”

    She turned to her sisters and said solemnly, “A young lady cannot be too careful to guard her heart, you know.”

    “But—“ Jane looked shocked.

    Mary’s face broke into a wide grin. “I was only teasing, Jane.”

    Elizabeth pressed on: “Mary? I have not forgotten.”

    “I think Mr. Rochester is charming. But I am certainly not in love.” Mary picked a bright yellow flower and twirled it around in her fingers. “Lizzy, do not think that I did not notice you and Mr. Darcy yesterday,” she said mischievously. “What happened?”

    “Well…everything is as it was—better than it was—he is not engaged, of course—how I could have thought—” Elizabeth rambled, carried away with her thoughts. “Such happiness—he loves me!”

    “Mr. Darcy said he loves you?” Jane gasped. “That is wonderful! Surely he will propose soon, Lizzy!”

    Elizabeth let out a contented sigh. “I can only hope!”


    6 December 18—
    Pemberley

    Dear brother,
    I am anxiously awaiting your arrival, almost as much as I am hoping to meet Miss Elizabeth Bennet. I have quite enjoyed your letters describing her; she sounds absolutely delightful. Have you proposed yet? Truly, I hope she will be accompanying you to Pemberley. Mrs. Reynolds and I have been preparing all sorts of festivities for the Christmas season and I know it will be more enjoyable with Miss Elizabeth present.

    Your adoring sister
    Georgiana

    A smile broke out on Darcy’s face as he read of his sister’s enthusiasm. He could not help but agree with her sentiments. Christmas at Pemberley would be truly wonderful with Elizabeth at his side


    Posted on: 2008-07-20

    Chapter Twenty-Four

    It was a pleasant afternoon and many of Hertfordshire’s residents could be seen out in the streets of Meryton. Mary, Kitty, and Lydia Bennet were three such residents.

    “Thank you for bringing us into the village, Mary,” said Kitty.

    “Oh yes! I cannot wait to purchase some new ribbons!” added Lydia.

    “I have always enjoyed walking to Meryton,” Mary replied distractedly.

    Kitty and Lydia stopped in front of the bookshop and shared an incredulous look. “Mary! You have done no such thing!” Lydia cried.

    Her words seemed to shake Mary from her reverie. “Hmmm? Oh…”

    “Come, Mary,” laughed Kitty, “seldom have you ventured out with us. What was it that drew you into Meryton today?”

    “Nothing in particular,” she insisted. “I think I will go into the bookshop while you make your purchases at the millner.” The girls disappeared into the shop, leaving Mary to her own amusement.

    The attractions of the bookshop were such that Mary’s thoughts very soon turned from a certain gentleman. She became immersed in the discovery of new types of literature as her reading was previously limited to sermons and the like. Her attention was caught by a volume of the metaphysical poets and Mary settled down in a small nook to read.

    “Miss Mary.”

    She gave no response or any indication that she had even heard the words. The gentleman smiled nonetheless and repeated his greeting, this time a bit louder. “Miss Mary?”

    Mary looked up, startled at the sound. “Why, Mr. Rochester, I had not expected to see you here.”

    “Yet here I am, as you see. Did none of your sisters accompany you into the village?”

    “Kitty and Lydia came with me to purchase ribbons and I know not what. I preferred to wait for them here.”

    “I must say I am glad you did. I would not have thought to look for you at the millner’s.”

    “Indeed.” Mary frowned slightly, not accustomed to such openly displayed interest.

    They spoke for a few more minutes on various subjects before Mr. Rochester declared that he had to leave. When her sisters came in not a minute later, Mary thought his timing must have been divine intervention. She had a feeling that Kitty and Lydia would have teased her mercilessly had they seen Mr. Rochester there with her.


    “What think you of books?” he said, smiling.

    “You are teasing me, sir! I believe you well know that I am an excellent reader,” Elizabeth replied archly.

    Darcy laughed. “Indeed, you are correct, madam.”

    Her eyes twinkled with merriment.

    “Have you perchance read any of Lord Byron’s poetry?” he inquired.

    “No, I have not, though I am very fond of poetry in general. Is he a particular favorite of yours, Mr. Darcy?”

    “He is only recently published, but I have quite enjoyed his work thus far.” Darcy picked up a small volume on one of the tables of the Netherfield library where they sat conversing. “Shall I read you my particular favorite?”

    Elizabeth nodded her agreement and he began reading in a low, velvety tone:

    “She walks in beauty, like the night
    Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
    And all that's best of dark and bright
    Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
    Thus mellowed to that tender light
    Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

    One shade the more, one ray the less,
    Had half impaired the nameless grace
    Which waves in every raven tress,
    Or softly lightens o'er her face;
    Where thoughts serenely sweet express
    How pure, how dear their dwelling place.

    And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
    So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
    The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
    But tell of days in goodness spent,
    A mind at peace with all below,
    A heart whose love is innocent!
    ”*

    Darcy’s gaze returned to meet her eyes, searching.

    “That was beautiful,” Elizabeth managed to say, entirely discomposed.

    “You are beautiful. Elizabeth, every time I read this poem, it brings your lovely image to mind.” He drew nearer and took her hands in his. “You must know—my heart is yours, completely and irrevocably. Elizabeth, will you marry me?”

    “I would be honoured,” she said.

    His countenance took on an expression of utter delight. “Truly, Elizabeth?”

    “Yes!” Elizabeth cried, laughing.

    Darcy began laughing as well. He lifted Elizabeth up and spun her around the room, unable to contain his joy. When he set her down, his lips claimed hers in a gentle kiss.

    After remaining thus situated for a few minutes, Elizabeth broke away from his embrace. “When will you speak with my father?”

    “As soon as you wish, my love,” Darcy replied. Again he smiled broadly and said teasingly, “That colour is most becoming on you, Elizabeth.”

    She felt that her face was indeed quite flushed. “You look entirely too pleased that you brought about such a change.”

    “And why should I not be?”

    “Very well. I would by no means suspend any pleasure of yours,” she said invitingly.


    Chapter Twenty-Five

    The sisters walked together, their fiancés trailing a few feet behind. Mr. Bennet’s consent had been given the previous day, as well as his approval of Darcy’s plan to bring Elizabeth to Pemberley for the holidays.

    “Oh, Lizzy, it gives me great joy to see you so happy.”

    “Likewise, my happiness is complete because you are in good spirits, dear Jane.” Elizabeth laughed. “Extremely good spirits, I should say!”

    Jane grinned in response but then fell silent with a thoughtful look on her face. They continued on, enjoying the warmer temperature of the afternoon. “When do you leave for Pemberley?” she inquired.

    “Within a fortnight, I believe.” Elizabeth turned around and called out, “Mr. Darcy, when do we leave?”

    “Saturday next,” he replied, coming forward to offer his arm while Bingley likewise approached Jane.

    Elizabeth’s eyes lit up with anticipation. “So soon? That is barely a week away!”

    “Yes, Georgiana is quite anxious to meet you, and I am scarcely less anxious to be home.” Darcy smiled. “You will love it, Elizabeth.”

    “Such presumption, sir!” she teased.

    “I have no scruples in admitting that I am quite proud of my estate.”

    She laughed. “And rightfully so, I should imagine.”

    “Elizabeth,” he said, his expression turning more serious, “I would like you to address me by my Christian name.”

    “Fitzwilliam.” She drew out each syllable slowly, savouring the feel of his name on her lips for the first time. “How well that sounds.”

    “Indeed. It sounds much better when you say it.”


    Over the next few days, what little preparations remained for their departure were concluded. The time passed in a flurry of activity and Elizabeth soon found herself being handed into the waiting carriage by her father while Darcy spoke with the driver.

    “There you are, Lizzy. Enjoy your visit. I daresay you will not spare a thought for your poor father who will miss you exceedingly,” Mr Bennet said impishly. Trying to keep a straight face, he went on to address the maid who was to accompany Elizabeth: “Rebecca, I trust you will keep Lizzy out of mischief; you know she is forever finding trouble of some sort.”

    The girl assented, smiling at his teasing while Darcy announced that everything was ready. The rest of the Bennets saw them off within a few minutes.

    The journey passed without much consequence. Elizabeth’s childlike excitement grew as they drew nearer, much to Darcy’s amusement. She chattered endlessly, asking about the sights of the Derbyshire countryside they travelled through—until they came in view of the estate. Then, her mind was so occupied with her surroundings that words failed her. Elizabeth was delighted. She had never seen a place for which nature had done more, or where natural beauty had been so little counteracted by an awkward taste. Indeed, she thought, to be mistress of this place was something great.

    As soon as they alighted from the carriage Georgiana ran forward to greet her brother with no little enthusiasm. “Fitzwilliam!” she cried, embracing him fiercely. She seemed to forget for a moment that she had a guest and seemed embarrassed when she remembered Elizabeth.

    Elizabeth laughed, trying to put her at ease. “Miss Darcy, I presume?”

    She nodded shyly while Darcy said, “Georgiana, this is Miss Elizabeth Bennet. She has consented to be my wife.”

    “It is a great pleasure to meet you at last, Miss Darcy. I have heard much about you.”

    “And I about you. Welcome to Pemberley, Miss Bennet.


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    Chapter Twenty-Six

    Upon entering the house, they greeted the housekeeper Mrs. Reynolds, whom Elizabeth found to be all that was amiable and welcoming.

    After a short period of rest, the group set off with the intention of giving Elizabeth a tour of the estate, beginning with the dining parlor. It was a large, well-proportioned room, handsomely fitted up. Elizabeth, after slightly surveying it, went to a window to enjoy its prospect. The hill, crowned with wood, from which they had descended, receiving increased abruptness from the distance, was a beautiful object, adorned with pristine white snow. Every disposition of the ground was good, and she looked on the whole scene—the river, the trees scattered on its banks, and the winding of the valley, as far as she could trace it—with delight.

    As they passed into other rooms these objects took different positions, but from every window there were beauties to be seen. The rooms were lofty and handsome, and their furniture suitable to the fortune of their proprietor—but Elizabeth saw, with admiration of his taste, that it was neither gaudy nor uselessly fine.

    These musings continued as Elizabeth wandered through the house, feeling lost in its enormity. It was not until she retired to her room to dress for dinner that Elizabeth was struck by an overwhelming revelation—Pemberley felt like home. She giggled to herself as she subsequently realized that Pemberley would actually be her home. What a delightful prospect!


    The extravagance of their first dinner at Pemberley furthered Elizabeth’s understanding and awe of Darcy’s consequence. Every detail had been arranged particularly, from the rosebud china to the golden candlesticks; and the overall atmosphere was lavish, yet tasteful. More importantly, Elizabeth thought, the company was very agreeable.

    After the meal, Darcy, Georgiana, and Elizabeth retired to the music room, where the young girl promptly requested her guest to play for them.

    “Very well, Miss Darcy, though I fear you will find my performance sorely lacking.”

    “Miss Bennet, that cannot be! My brother has told me he has rarely heard anything that gave him more pleasure.”

    Glancing at Darcy, Elizabeth laughed and said, “He has clearly exaggerated the extent of my talents, no doubt for some mischievous reason of his own.”

    “Oh no—Fitzwilliam never exaggerates—he always tells the absolute truth.”

    “Indeed. No one admitted to the pleasure of hearing you play could think anything wanting,” Darcy added.

    Though not in agreement with his appraisal, Elizabeth bowed her head demurely in resignation. “Miss Darcy, I hope we will hear you perform as well.”

    Georgiana agreed, noting that she could have no qualms in such a small, intimate party. Moving to the pianoforte, Elizabeth selected one of her favourites and began to play. As was her wont, she slurred over the difficult passages and compensated for it with a great deal of emotion to render the performance more pleasing. The result was a success. Georgiana praised her playing excessively and expressed a wish to practice some duets with her, while Darcy looked on in earnest admiration.

    Following Georgiana’s performance, the group spent another half-hour in conversation before withdrawing to their rooms.


    One afternoon, when it was tolerably warm enough for walking out, Darcy took Elizabeth around the vast expanse of Pemberley’s grounds. Elizabeth was quite as enchanted with the park as she was with her companion.

    Finding such enjoyment in the natural beauty of Pemberley, her spirits soon rose to playfulness and Elizabeth asked Darcy whether he would not like to elope, thereby evading the exasperating effusions of Mrs Bennet.

    Darcy’s countenance betrayed a great look of surprise at her remark until he realized she was teasing him—again. With that understanding, he appreciated the jest for what it was and burst out laughing. “I...” he laughed again, “I do not know how to respond to that.”

    Eyes sparkling brightly, Elizabeth said, “It is perfectly acceptable for you to not always have a ready reply to my impertinent remarks. A wife, you know, must have some advantage over her husband.”

    “My dear,” said he, lowering his tone, “I believe you are already in possession of many advantages over me.” Darcy moved closer to Elizabeth and took her hands in his.

    “Indeed? I was not aware...”

    “Naturally,” he murmured, leaning in so she could feel his breath by her ear. “Your very presence...distracts me...exceedingly.”

    Such an intimate moment was not easily recovered from, and it was some time before the couple resumed their walk and light-hearted conversation.

    Unsurprisingly, Darcy and Elizabeth passed many such afternoons in this manner, occasionally accompanied by Georgiana. They found much pleasure in spending time together and often sought moments of relative privacy to enjoy each other’s company more affectionately.


    Chapter Twenty-Seven

    Before long, Christmas Eve was upon them. All of the household—especially Mrs Reynolds and Georgiana—had worked tirelessly over the last two weeks to prepare Pemberley to celebrate the holiday. Elizabeth endeavoured to assist them in any way she could but in the end was not allowed to do much more than advise Georgiana in choosing the best decorations.

    In accordance with family tradition, the Darcys planned to exchange gifts after dinner on Christmas Eve and attend church the next morning.

    Following the meal, Elizabeth went up to her room to retrieve her gifts, feeling strangely anxious that something was missing.

    “Rebecca!” she cried as she rushed in the door. “Where are the gifts? I cannot remember the last time I saw them! Are you sure you packed everything?”

    The young maid smiled and replied calmly, “Yes, Miss Lizzy, everything is right here, as you left it not three hours ago.”

    Elizabeth visibly relaxed and her face now wore a slightly embarrassed expression. “Ah...yes, I remember now, thank you Rebecca.” She took the packages and retreated back to the parlour where they were gathering.

    She entered to find Darcy awaiting her and was secretly relieved that Georgiana had not yet returned. Her fiancée greeted her by bestowing a kiss on her hand. “You look radiant tonight, my dear.”

    “Thank you.” She gave him an appraising glance. “I do believe you are in your best looks this evening, Fitzwilliam. Very handsome.”

    Elizabeth smirked as he blushed very becomingly and Georgiana came in.

    “Fitzwilliam, are you well? You look flushed,” his concerned sister said.

    He only coloured more deeply and it was all Elizabeth could do to restrain herself from laughing. Somehow she regained her composure before Darcy and she suggested that they begin exchanging gifts.

    Georgiana presented her gifts first, as she was the youngest and most excited. To Elizabeth she gave a pair of lambskin gloves and to her brother a new riding crop.

    “Why, thank you, Georgiana! These must be the softest gloves I’ve ever had. They are very nice.”

    Darcy added his thanks as well.

    Next was Elizabeth’s turn. She handed Georgiana a small satchel containing some of her lavender perfume.

    “Oh! This is wonderful. You make it yourself, do you not?”

    Elizabeth replied in the affirmative and presented Darcy with a book of poetry and handkerchief embroidered with his initials.

    Darcy was delighted. “Thank you, Elizabeth. I shall treasure it always. How thoughtful of you to remember my love of poetry,” he said teasingly.

    Her eyes twinkled merrily. “I could hardly forget such a thing,” she replied, remembering his poetic proposal.

    Smiling broadly, he gave Georgiana a lovely sage-coloured bonnet. “The very one! How did you know which bonnet I wanted?” she asked.

    “Do you not recall? You admired it, and the shopkeeper said it suited you very well—it was on your last shopping excursion, when we were lately in London,” he replied, amused.

    “Oh,” Georgiana said sheepishly. Then her face brightened and she added, “Go on, I can hardly wait to see what you have bought your fiancée.”

    Turning to Elizabeth she whispered, “I begged and begged but he would not show me! I am sure it is something wonderful.”

    Time seemed suspended while Darcy rose, seated himself on the settee next to Elizabeth, and offered her a small velvet box. With a sharp intake of breath she took it and held Darcy’s gaze for a loving moment before opening the box. Inside was an exquisite piece of jewellery—a gold heart-shaped locket.

    “Fitzwilliam, it is perfect. Thank you very much.”

    He took the locket and moved to fasten it around her neck. “I knew it would suit you perfectly.” As he fixed the clasp his hand touched her skin with the gentlest of caresses. “How did I know? It reminded me of what I love best about you, dearest Elizabeth—your heart of gold.”


    Epilogue

    One year later

    Elizabeth Darcy sat at her dressing table recalling fond memories of her first Christmas at Pemberley and all the events that followed in the next year.

    They celebrated their marriage vows in a double ceremony with Jane and Mr Bingley about two months after her return to Longbourn. Right before the wedding, Mr Rochester proposed to Mary. They decided on a long engagement, which was just as well, because Mary had her hands full preparing Kitty—and then Lydia—to be out in society. That summer Kitty joined the Gardiners on a tour of Derbyshire and the lake country. They had a lovely trip and quite enjoyed their short stay at Pemberley, during which Kitty and Georgiana became dear friends. The Darcys also received frequent visits from Mr Bennet, whose prudent advice they were always thankful for.

    Elizabeth’s musings ceased as soon as she sensed her husband’s presence. She turned to see him standing behind her and greeted him with a kiss. “I was just reflecting on the past year. We have been so blessed, Fitzwilliam. But...I believe another blessing may be on its way soon.”

    His eyes lit up. “Truly, Elizabeth? You are with child?”

    “It does appear so.” She smiled brilliantly, a soft glow about her.

    “My love, I have never seen you as beautiful as you are now.”


    Many thanks to all those who read and commented on “A More Prudent Parent,” and to Julia, Amy, and Emily for their beta help.

    The End


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